I took some old iphone icons I had made, and tried to made look better.
I ended up with this. I'm pretty happy about the result.
I don't really know what to them with those. Make just an icon set available for download, OR if somebody knows how to make/construct/code a proper iphone theme (that we will make available), I'll be glad to complete this set and make extra grafics to complete the theme. So if somebody want to do this collab with me
Oh, and comments and advices to make this look better are appreciated
UPDATE
Uffff, a couple of more icons to go and normally the set will be finished, and I'll be abble to pass to the theme itself
I'm not really happy with a couple of them (notes for example), but maybe I'll come up later with a couple of better ideas.)
These are really clean. I agree with you that the notes icon could be better.
My recommendations for it are as follows: - Loose the white text on the icon. - Rotate it 90 degrees to make it look more like a notebook. - put a book mark on the cover, and or post it note type tags on the un-bound side (but in a subtle way)
I really like it though. The icon with the cloud looks a little out of place with the rest of them. It is almost jarring visually in contrast to the others. What app are you intending it for?
I actually like this dark icon set. These are the type I rarely see as everyone tries to do light and airy, or business-like with a Web 2.0 feel.
The detail on theses are great as well as the careful balance in the to not make them too dark that it is hard to see, but not to light to look awkward. Somehow I like this better than the previous set I critiqued.
Out of all the icons in this set, I like the little address book the best, somehow my eyes were drawn to that one immediately. My least favorite would have to be the date one. The depth in it looks a bit strange to me. Probably instead of having that little tab, I would just go ahead and alter the tab out.
These are just amazing. If you ever finished these or just released these my life would be made. My 3 favorite themes are this one torsion and iphone pearl and none of them have Ben released they have just died
very cool. I would love to use these, and see what I can do as far as making some additional icons / themes to use it for the iphone. Do you have the icons some where on cydia?
I agree with you that the notes icon could be better.
My recommendations for it are as follows:
- Loose the white text on the icon.
- Rotate it 90 degrees to make it look more like a notebook.
- put a book mark on the cover, and or post it note type tags on the un-bound side (but in a subtle way)
I really like it though.
The icon with the cloud looks a little out of place with the rest of them. It is almost jarring visually in contrast to the others. What app are you intending it for?
The detail on theses are great as well as the careful balance in the to not make them too dark that it is hard to see, but not to light to look awkward. Somehow I like this better than the previous set I critiqued.
Out of all the icons in this set, I like the little address book the best, somehow my eyes were drawn to that one immediately. My least favorite would have to be the date one. The depth in it looks a bit strange to me. Probably instead of having that little tab, I would just go ahead and alter the tab out.
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